toooooo slooooooow.....
Actually Nero,
Your flash is waaaayy too slow. Either that or just too long. The flash style you use looks to be a little dated (earlier ng stuff). If you were to make this thing any longer it would bore your audience to death. I would be a much more decent flash if you could pick up the pace a bit and not drag things out so much. The music was alright (was that Pantera?), but not too engaging for this sci-fi backdrop.
Honestly, this flash needs much more work. Speed it up, make it more engaging, and then lets see where you're at.
Keep it up !
-- SP